I hate being one of those jerks that say "This isn't house" and act like I know everything about music, because i see where you're going with that whole "house" feel, but i feel like this almost fits a little bit better with techno or possibly some other category.
Anyhow, i liked it. I just feel its starts with something that doesn't transition well to the "house" part of the song, which makes me feel, again, that it could probably be placed in a better category that better suits the song.
anyhow, great work man :)