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needs to be a little better polished and a little more in tune. chord progression needs to be a little better presented to the listener. you may wanted to have cleaned up that rhythm line a little bit. a clear beat could really be found at the beginning of the track. otherwise, you have potential to make a great song.
you may want to have slowed it down too, blues typically doesnt flow so fast, and it typically has a more expanded chord progression than just one chord.
anyhow, id like to see what you come up with in the future. keep me posted.
Dj LC

Destrayop responds:

Thanks for the listen and the review dude!
Yeah.. Maybe I'll do a more bluesy version someday-- this one really should qualify as general rock or something else, but in comparison to my other stuff, I couldn't think of a better place to put it than blues. Thanks again for the constructive criticism dude, it's much appreciated.

just think of the bpm! haha, if i ever danced to this, it would hurt! and it kinda distorted the voice.
lol, thats the only thing id have to critique, otherwise it was pretty good. you should have changed that high pitched thin synth, cuz it was a little hard on the ears, and i feel like if u woulda changed it, it woulda sounded just a little different a lot better.

viewtifulday responds:

But I love the tempo! Haha and yeah, I see what you're saying about the synth--originally I tried a fat supersynth for the lead, but it interfered too much with the hats and such...my program really sucks :(

I hate being one of those jerks that say "This isn't house" and act like I know everything about music, because i see where you're going with that whole "house" feel, but i feel like this almost fits a little bit better with techno or possibly some other category.
Anyhow, i liked it. I just feel its starts with something that doesn't transition well to the "house" part of the song, which makes me feel, again, that it could probably be placed in a better category that better suits the song.
anyhow, great work man :)

DjTrailblazer responds:

Thanks. but I'll have to disagree it's definitely house.

beautiful work of art man. i liked everything about it.
instrumentals. drums. bass. everything.
mastering was spot on, made everything fit beautifully.
now that i think about it, I've never actually done this with anyone, or asked to do this with anyone, but if you want to work on a mix together sometime, just pm me, and maybe we can get something done via the dumping grounds. id like to see what we could learn from each other.
sincerely,
Dj LC.

hairyscaryDJ responds:

thx alot DJ LC! really appreciate ur kind words,u just made my day!
sure we can work on something together,or at least try.hehe/hairy

i really like your work with mastering, man!
i really do! its just that it's way to repetitive. the lead synths get a little annoying, and that underlying bass gargling bass got pretty annoying as well. you've gotta get some variation, that would be my only critique. otherwise, your mastering skills are there to make a pretty solid piece.

SonOfFlynn responds:

i know d: i gotta add more. i did this in like 30 min. i was intending to add some lead in it. right now its all rhythm

wow! i really like this! it's got its own taste of d&b. it's extremely unique.
i had a little skepticism when the track started, but as soon as those drums came in, i was like, wow, the drum is sync'd up with the instruments a little differently then other tracks. i like.
2 things.
you might not have wanted to end the track as hard as you did. a simple cut off or fade out would have sufficed for this track. just ride the bass notes out or something.
and it got kinda repetitive, but thats just something that may happen. work on like a verse to chorus thing, cuz u already had a bridge planned nicely.
good job!
10/10 5/5

DetiousMusic responds:

I do think I ended it too abruptly, I'll go change that. I ran out of options when I wanted to progress the song, so I got kind of lazy and just repeated the beginning, but thanks a lot man! :D

me gusta mucho.
i wish i had the skill to make simple stuff like this thats really catchy. always make my stuff to complex.
5/5 9/10

DetiousMusic responds:

I'm not as skilled as one may think, I'm pretty amateur. d:
Well if you'd ever want to collab we could get a simple/complex piece goin. O:
Thanks!

this song has gotten more downloads than i've gotten listens to any of my songs.
about 1500 was the higest for me, and you top that by 400.
thats impressive. i like the repetitive catchy beat too :)
Good job.

keosni391 responds:

Thanks man! :)

See, you don't need to be a music production genius to make a fantastic song!
I really dig the simplicity. that's what gets people into it at the beginning. Moreover, you kinda start out with a "verse" type melody in the beginning. What i mean by that is simple; if you simply take the melody you chose and put words in place of the synth (as if someone was singing that line) you'd probably end up doing one verse of the entire song.
So what I think you could do to make everything sound even better is to take that "verse" loop, and after a few loops of that, maybe kick into a "chorus" type loop. Since i've already explained what I meant by "verse" loop, you could probably infer what I mean by "chorus" loop as well :) you smart guy.
anyway, great job on the song, and keep me posted for new ones.
definitely check out some of mine, too. I appreciate all the support I get from everybody on newgrounds. There what got me 3 best tracks ever :)

Keep it fresh
-Live Carbon

Barrellaj responds:

lol I love you

mcnibs96
Rated 3 / 5 stars
KillinMyFriends
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This is just an example list of people that have no idea what they're talking about.
You really rocked it here.
There's really no limit to what you can do with music, and not enough categories to classify everything in.
You don't judge based on where it fits in a musical genre, but you judge it based on whether it was dope or not, and this, my friend, was absolute dope.

aaronmusslewhite responds:

Lol thanks for your support. Those kind of comments were inevitable with it becoming any kind of popular. Some people wanna hang on to the older sound, that's fine, it's just not really my style. Glad you and most people seem to like it tho, thanks!

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