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come on man!
no excuse!
you should at least have fruityloops or something!
you should really wait until you get something good before u just start posting stuff on here.
i didnt start posting until i had work that made it into a 4.5 catagory right away.
anyways, man, i hope you get what you need, cuz from what i hear in this track, you have potential.
I agree. The thing is, I used to use Reason 5.0 on my Mac laptop but then it crashed and I lost everything, so until I get a new one I'm gonna be just using Audiotool :P
HEYHEY! PROGRESS! I LIKE!
good job!
i like the progress man. it could use a little more of that fullness i told you not to lose.
it also needs to start a bit better.
besides that, you've come a long way. you must have got some help from Dj X-Trax!
that guy really knows what he's doing. listen to him. this stuff is pretty hardcore like 2/5.
but again with the ending man, you need to work on that.
allover, it was great!
im still gunna keep you posted!
NICE JOB!
Thanks dude!! I really apreciate your reviews, you're awesome.
And Yeah Dj X-Trax and me worked very hard on this song. He's an awesome person. You can check out his version of the song here: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/408730
great job man.
i loved the hardcore delay intro with that sexy ambiance thing going on.
break down to the hardcore medal with low tones in between the highs.
then come the harmonic tones on top of the melody.
then a badass choir part.
orchestral verses.
well composed, bro.
it has every element that makes a good metal song, and some elements really went above and beyond.
keep writing man.
There's actually no delay in the intro, I actually just played it to make it sound like there was delay, good way to practice consistency with your picking.
Glad you liked it!
nice job
i enjoyed the way you brought classics, like cannon, and put it into this tech beat. good job. sept it really started to get repetitive. you cant just rely on one line. make some more stuff to make it sound better. you need bass. and a lot of it.
Thanks for the review, I'm definitely going to go back and remix this song haha.
hey man, not bad at all!
ok, so i like the overall idea for the song completely! its a great song.
there are just several aspects bugging me with the entire song.
what i enjoyed
-intro-good intro. the part in between the first drum hit, and the rest of the drum line allowed too much room where nothing happened, so you might want to put instrument filler, preferably bass in between then.
constructive critiques:
-sometimes, when the melody synths come in, it sounds really hard hitting, clawing and scratching at the ears, almost hard to listen to. you might wanna look into how you have the amps and decibels set.
-DRUM LINE.
what is with your drum loop. as soon as the song began, i thought, hmm, that sounds like that drumloop could turn into something awesome. and it never changed once. that was really disappointing to hear, as an artist.
-transition
your transition to the other key was a poor way to transition. just by slowly bending pitches. yeah, i guess its not done often, so i guess its something different, but the reason why is, yeah, it offers something different to provide a transition, but it creates unbearable dissonance, and makes the song hard to listen to. learn how to shift keys in different ways, that will help a lot. the way that you did it wasn't good. and, also, you shifted to a key that doesnt match up in a good way with the original key you wrote the song in. you might want to select a more complementary tone for smoother transition.
-repetitiveness
ok, well, this song would be good, if it ended a lot earlier. i know, i like to have long songs too, but sometimes, people need to realize that songs can be good short or long. some songs sound even 10X better when they're shorter. this can be for 2 reasons
1. the song came to a resolution point, and everything already came to a most satisfying close. that wasn't yours, but its just one of the reasons
2. yours. the song, if repeated too much, becomes extremely repetitive. i enjoy your song. but i dont enjoy it enough to listen to it for 6 minutes. sorry.
i probably had more things to critique, but i forgot them, sorry :D
Well there are some things i have to fix right? Well ill consider them, but i dont do generic trance. I understand that everything you are telling me is pro, but still if i had made some of those changes then i would be making generic trance, and i want to differ from that. Pitchbending, in a way, makes it Chaotic. But i agree as that wasn't the key was was hoping to make it to. I overshot it and went too high. But FL studio pitch knobs are way to small to tell anything. Your right. All of the instruments in this song are actually fighting because i didn't do what all great artists have to do sometime in there lifetime. I didn't master it. I still like how this came out however as even if the key change was extremely odd sounding it actually made sense. I would've changed it by now if i didn't like it so i really want to keep it how it is. Its like one of those mistakes that makes you go"Oh so THATS how it should sound." Im so sorry about the percussion, but i didn't put all of my effort into this song. I would've mastered it already, and shortened it...as well as add a breakarp. But i meant this to calm you and energize you at the same time. Back to the key change. Poor is not the right way of saying things here...i think. I probably about to be disproved through PM but Im going to say that you where going for odd. Sure its amateur, but even then its kinda not used very often so its original in a way. I definitely could've done better though, but Im still learning so...yea. Thanks for your review as i will take everything said here into account.
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