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u might wanna work on those guitar vsti's or whatever you use to give it a more realistic, but you did a very good job with the drums. the only thing i could say is you could have given the high hat a little more work in blending. but otherwise a nice job.

Jade-the-X9ian responds:

Thanks! ^_^

I'll practise using the gituare programme more, then. That really helps.

I thought it was pretty good; it was a pretty solid, basic beat to start you out at the get go.
Take the knowledge you have already, and apply some more variation to the loops, otherwise, its not really a song, more of a loop.
Make some of your own drum fillers, bass drops, melodic patterns, other types of variation; it's absolutely limitless!
I see that you already have talent, and trust me, from experience, im not the best, im no expert, i've been doing this for years and im no where near perfection, but i do know that it does take years to get where I am.
However, I'm straying from the point. What I would recommend for someone in your position in sequencing would be looking at automation and different kinds of envelopes. They work differently for every kind of sequencing program on the market, so you know what to do! Use the trusty interwebs and look up things like automation, or envelopes. It will definitely change the way you look at, approach, and do your sequencing. It will give you so many more options you couldn't get without them. It definitely helps when your making transitions, bridges, and verses, so that you don't lose the rhythm and beat of the song while going from one idea to the next; it allows everything to blend into one continuous story!

I hope you take a look at some of these things and apply them to what you're already doing, because you've already shown you have so much potential! I look forward to hearing your tracks in the future :)

-Live Carbon

Feinei responds:

Thank you for the opinion, it is noted and I will look into it.
You're also spot on that I have difficulty with transitions, it's basically the one part of every song that gives me trouble.

i like it.

:) i really like the dedication of this song.
to amp it up, you can put in a bit of background noise so it doesnt get dry.
otherwise, good job :)
chord progression was well chosen.
stay strong.

SteNcils responds:

Thank you, that really, really does mean a lot (:

this belongs in trance.

detuned synths with snares? it already belongs in trance..
come on, man....

SKILLZmakeKILLZ responds:

i disagree.

Synths and snares with a nice kick and bass to me implys techno.
i didnt think the synths were detuned either, but thats my opinion.
if they were then what synth isnt?

trance is more rythmic with plucks and arpeggios. and not such a heavy kick.
also trance is lower energy and more repetitive to me.

okay!

like the idea.
several of the synth pitch rises and drops kind of annoyed me, but for the most part, nice job.

kinghousemusic responds:

Thank you, this really is not my best work so I'm glad you liked it :3

ok, i see potential.

the guitar really drowns out the drums.
youve gotta lower the guitar and up the drums.
it was all very in sync for a basic submission tho. keep working, and be sure to keep me posted about when the final version comes out. inbox me.

ruddyhell responds:

thanks for the advice and will do!

close, but not close enough!

mas volume, por favor!
louder! pump it up, bro guy! you can do better! i like the beginning. with an intro like that, you have so much more to offer for the main riff. make those drums louder, introduce a better bass, with a few more synths. dont underestimate the usage of velocity changes. velocity changes more than you think. you can also introduce a lot more synths. alright, well nice job over all with chord progression and musical idea, but so far youve just gotta make it a bit more hard hitting, then it will sound super boss!

eatmeatleet responds:

thanks for review, man. Didn't expect any comments on this track. Thanks for input!

alright alright!

youve got some kinda reverse kick that i really dig.
its kind of all slow build up to somehting huge that never unleashes.
you need kick! you need bass!
pump that bass drum!
velocity makes a difference.
you could have really dropped some serious stuff here! that was so legit!
you just never took that initiative to make some huge thing! i really love it! i love the chord progression and everything!

viewtifulday responds:

Whoa, this was probably the most inspirational feedback I've ever read in my life

very good!

i really liked it!
you just gotta work on velocity distribution between tracks and thats about it.
maybe pump up those drums. find the right stuff to do it.
i have faith you can make some pretty great stuff if you just do the minor tweaking!
the minor stuff effects it in the long run!
keep treking, bro, you'll get it it right!
i really like it tho!

montehawks responds:

thanks so much! (i just noticed your review)

however this song is long gone... i've since updated to a new computer and the company i chose to backup my data failed in listening when i said "for the love of god save all of my FL STUDIO files!!!"

i may have the vocals lying around somewhere tho... hmmm

haha, very nice!

u gotta up the drums man!

DJsohlinyin responds:

up the drums as in heavier? or more complex??

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